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REAL LIFE EXAMPLES OF "WORKS CITED" PROBLEMS

OR

HOW TO GET A BAD GRADE ON YOUR "WORKS CITED" LIST

Three Essential Information Questions:

  • Is the information relevant & reliable (authoritative, accurate, comprehensive)?

  • What do YOU think about the information that you have collected?

  • Are you using/sharing the information ethically?

 

Works Cited Rubric

Accuracy and Authority

Advocacy & Objectivity

Currency & Coverage

Variety of Media

MLA Format
Web Evaluation Tutorial Plagiarism  

 


 

Lack of Accuracy and Authority In Your Sources Will Result In a Poor Grade

Your sources need to be written by reputable and reliable writers.  This can be especially tricky with websites.  You need to determine who is the author of the page and what organization is sponsoring that web page.  For example, does the page appear on CNN, or is it a personal web page on free web hosts such as Angelfire, Geocities or Xoom?

HINTS

DOES THE WEB PAGE PASS THE "EYEBROW TEST?"
(THANKS TO SARA JOHNS FOR THIS GREAT PHRASE)

You should go to the actual home page of the site to see who is writing and who is sponsoring the particular page you are citing.  If you are lucky, there will be a home page link.  You can also get there by deleting the end of the address, section by section until you get back to the part of the address that ends with .com or .org etc.

  • Personal pages might also have the word "user" or "member" in the address.  For example: http://members.tripod.com/~waycool_dude/main.html

  • Personal pages often incorporate the web author's name BEFORE the address of the actual web host.  So - be a little skeptical about addresses that have 1 or more periods in the sections preceding the .net or .com etc.  
    For example:

http://www.fairbruk.demon.co.uk/whome.html 

This sites are very funny - and obviously not intended for research.  But keep in mind that there are MANY personal web pages about serious topics that you might mistake for authoritative websites.  LET THE RESEARCHER BEWARE!!

 

Is an "eyebrow" web address always the sign of a bad web site?

  • You should be suspicious of reports and journal articles that are posted on a website that is not the official website where the article was first published.  Ask yourself - "how do I know that this site has reproduced the journal article accurately?"  It is very possible for anyone to change the original work to fit their own agenda.  If you wish to use the article, you will need to locate the original article from the official site to ensure its accuracy.

    Example:
      
    "Bush approves nuclear response" By Nicholas Kralev
    The Washington Times, 31 January 2003
    http://www.pushhamburger.com/nuke1.htm

                            AND

    http://home.earthlink.net/~platter/articles/030131-kralev.html

    When I checked for the original article on the web (http://www.washtimes.com/world/20030131-27320419.htm) it was no longer available.  I then searched for the article in Gale Custom Newspaper database, and was unable to find the article - even though this database does archive the Washington Times.

WHAT ABOUT SPOOF SITES?

Shards O' Glass

 

 

BUT - NOT ALL BAD WEB SITES ARE SO OBVIOUS

CLASSIC EXAMPLES OF SITES LACKING AUTHORITY:
(Most of these turned up in actual student papers!)
 

DON'T BELIEVE EVERYTHING YOU FIND ON A GOOGLE SEARCH

RESEARCH TOPIC - Pop Culture in the 1970's 

Go to   and type in the following question:  Where did Elvis die?

Are all the answers the same?

 

RESEARCH TOPIC - Pearl Harbor              
 

Through our Eyes, Hearts & Minds 
(The site was used by one of our high school students for a major term paper)

http://library.thinkquest.org/J0110055/

This LOOKS like a good site about World War II.  Even the address looks respectable.  The word library is even in it.  And it ends in .org.  So what's wrong?  Take a look at the "about" section to find out!

 


RESEARCH TOPIC - Edgar Allan Poe  

Poe, Edgar Allan
http://bau2.uibk.ac.at/sg/poe/Bio.html
Looks like good information.  Includes a bibliography.  But - who is the author?  Why is he an expert?  Click on the author's name at the bottom of the page to find out what his credentials are.  Is there anything there on his personal page indicating what background, experience or degrees he has that would make him a qualified expert about Edgar Allan Poe?  Your next step is to find out who is the sponsoring organization.  In other words, what organization is providing the web space for the page?  Does this organization have anything to do with American Literature?  The page includes an extensive bibliography and states that the information is from "The New Grolier Electronic Encyclopedia".  Does this statement make the site acceptable for research?  If the information matched "The New Grolier Electronic Encyclopedia" exactly - what has the web master of this page done that is against U. S. Copyright Law?

RESEARCH TOPIC - Mark Twain   

The Early Years
http://faculty.winthrop.edu/kosterj/writ102/marktwain.htm
And some pages are just plain ridiculous.  If you find information that conflicts with other sources - that is a clue you might be on a bogus website.  This one might fool someone who knows nothing about Mark Twain.

 

RESEARCH TOPIC - Basketball                   

History of Basketball
http://www.history-of-basketball.com/index.htm
Who is the author of this site?

 

RESEARCH TOPIC - Genetics 

RYT Hospital - Dwayne Medical Center
http://www.rythospital.com/
Who is the author of this site?  Where is this hospital located?  Do any reputable sites link to it?

RESEARCH TOPIC - Vampires     
  

The Federal Vampire & Zombie Agency
http://www.fvza.org/
This site was turned in by a student doing research on vampires. With a subject like vampires I realize that it is a little tricky to find credible sources - but there really are many sites out there that cover the history of vampire legends in a scholarly manner. Trust me....this is not one of them.


When unsure, go to Google and type in the following search:

             link:http://www.fvza.org/


Google
Search WWW Search www.gananda.org

Take a look at some of the pages that link to the site in question. There are many uncredible 
(more like incredible) sites that link to The Federal Vampire & Zombie Agency.

 

RESEARCH TOPIC - Animal Rights      bonsai.jpg (8468 bytes)

BONSAI Kitten
http://www.bonsaikitten.com/
Who is the author of this site?  Is there somewhere that you can order the necessary equipment online?  Do any reputable sites link to it?

RESEARCH TOPIC - Personal - Looking up a long lost friend or relative  dls.gif (2903 bytes)

National Driver's License Records Bureau
http://www.license.shorturl.com/
Seems like a useful site.... Here is how it describes itself: "
Welcome to the National Driver's License Records Bureau web site - where you can search our online database of over 220 million U.S. driver's license photos and driver's license information currently on file, absolutely FREE. Search our files with the form below."

Let's look at the address of the site to see if there are any clues:  http://www.license.shorturl.com/

Hmmmm....  What domain is this site (.net? .com? .org? etc.)  What does a government use as a domain name?

Would a government site offer free access to everyone to look up drivers liscenses?

Now let's see how the site works:  http://www.license.shorturl.com/

RESEARCH TOPIC - Civil War   

Facts about...The Civil War from the "Facts About" Series
http://scnc.hps.k12.mi.us/~hwmedia/encyclopedia/content/civilwar.htm

Look at the address.  Do you see anything suspicious?

Yes - there is that funny "eyebrow" thingy - but.......

What about the word encyclopedia in the address?

What about the home page - it's a school isn't it?

 

 

RESEARCH TOPIC - Pets  

Dog Island
http://www.thedogisland.com/ 

 

What if you hunt around a site for clues, check what other sites link to it etc. and you are still not sure?

Type in the name of the site, along with the word hoax and see what comes up.

With the Federal Vampire and Zombie Agency, I went to google and typed in the following:

+"Federal Vampire And Zombie Agency" +hoax


Google
Search WWW Search www.gananda.org

There are also some standard, well regarded "hoax busting" sites that you can use. 

Here is a good article about hoax sites:
Urban Legends After Dark
http://www.ulrc.com.au/html/AfterDark.asp?RefNum=ULAR0012&Page=1

Here are 3 dependable "hoax busting" sites:

Snopes
http://www.snopes.com

Hoaxbusters
http://hoaxbusters.ciac.org/
A great starting place to find info on Internet hoaxes, fake email warnings, etc.

Museum of Hoaxes
http://www.museumofhoaxes.com/

Urban Legends
http://urbanlegends.about.com/

 


Note:  Some of the above pages may have perfectly accurate information - but they are not acceptable sources because there is either no information about who the author is, or the information indicates that the author is not qualified as an expert.  Additionally, there is no organization (larger site) sponsoring the information.  If a page has no author listed, or no credentials for that author, but if it is part of CNN or PBS or National Geographic etc., then it has some credibility.

If you STILL do no believe that there are many inaccurate and even bogus sites out there - take a look at some of these examples:

INTERNET RESEARCH - THE GOOD, THE BAD, AND THE UGLY

And then there is always the infamous CLONAID! 

Remember:  It is your job to locate reliable sources.  If your source is written by an unqualified author, your teacher will not be able to accept the parts of your paper that are based on that source.  It is up to you to make sure that all your sources are reliable.  When in doubt - find another source.

EXAMPLES OF SPONSORING ORGANIZATIONS

A sponsoring organization is very important to help you determine if a web page is authoritative.

Kurt Vonnegut, New York State Author 2001-2003
http://www.albany.edu/writers-inst/vonnegutkurt.html
There are 2 organizations/institutions that are associated with this web page.  Both of them contribute to this being a very worthwhile source about this author.  What are the names of the organizations and how did you identify them?  If these organizations were not clearly marked at the top of the page - how would you find out for sure?

Being able to answer the above questions will help you to correctly site an internet page.  Virtually all web pages will have a sponsoring organization and that organization is what you write down on your citation slip under "Title of Site or Larger Work".  Some pages will also have another organization/institution associated with it.  That is what you write down on your citation slip under "Name of any associated institution".

 

ADDITIONAL INFORMATION ON WEB PAGE EVALUATION

Evaluating Web Pages: Techniques to Apply & Questions to Ask 
http://www.lib.berkeley.edu/TeachingLib/Guides/Internet/Evaluate.html
An excellent guide to web evaluation from the library at the University of Berkeley.


Too Many Advocacy Sources Or a Lack of Balance/Objectivity in Advocacy Sites Will Result In a Poor Grade

These sites have a commercial, political or social agenda.  The authors of the page want to sell you a product, a political agenda or a social position.  It does not mean that the information is incorrect.  It just means that it is probably biased or slanted towards the authors opinions.  You will often need to reference some of these resources - but you should balance them with alternative viewpoints.  Examples of advocacy web sites are:

The NRA
http://www.nra.org/
The Brady Campaign
http://www.bradycampaign.org/index.asp

 

DO ADVOCACY SITES EVER TRY TO "HIDE" (OR AT LEAST DOWNPLAY) THEIR IDENTITY?

EXAMPLE:

What is the "larger site" that is sponsoring this page? 
<http://www.circuses.com/>

At first glance - it would appear to be Circuses.com

Without reading anything - do you think a young child might think that this is a site about going to the circus?

Do you see any evidence of any sponsoring institutions?

What does PETA stand for?

Are they likely to have a favorable view of circuses?

The site is an excellent example of a site that downplays who is the actual sponsor. Although the site looks at first glance like it was perhaps designed by the circus industry, the actual sponsor is PETA.  As a matter of fact,  is a actually part of PETA's own website. 

What are some suspicious facts?

  1. PETA is listed - but the acknowledgment is very low key - and appears at the bottom of the page. You might assume that PETA is simply acknowledging their support of the site

  2. In fact they are a direct sponsor of the site, and most likely are actually writing the content and hosting the page as well. 

  3. They are actively disguising the fact that they are the authors of the site. 

So - how did I find out?  I discovered it quite by accident.  The student had listed the web page as  http://www.circuses.com/introduction.asp.  When correcting her paper, I mistyped the address and went to  http://www.circuses.com/introduct.asp instead. Much to my surprise, I found myself on a 404 error page posted by PETA suggesting what might have gone wrong.

Did the student lose any points?   No.  The student was researching animal rights and she had listed PETA as an associated site in her citation. She had also included a wide variety of sources on the topic.  Taken as a whole her works cited list covered a variety of perspectives. 

This site is a great example of why it is necessary to be a critical information consumer.


Lack of Currency and Coverage In Your Sources Will Result In a Poor Grade

Remember that you use fewer than the minimum required number of sources, you will not be able to score higher than 5 points on this section of the rubric.  Works Cited Rubric

IMPORTANT - To get a SUPERIOR grade (all 4 points in each category of the "works cited rubric") you must have MORE than the minimum required number of sources.   Works Cited Rubric

Other things to watch out for:

  • Be careful that your sources are not too old.  Not everything on the web is up-to-date.   Many pages were uploaded in the early 90's and just left to "rot".

  • Make sure that you cover as many sides of the issue as possible.


Lack of Variety of Media In Your Works Cited List Will Result In a Poor Grade

 

Heavy dependence on one type of resource will usually not give you as balanced or thorough an overview as you need.  In order to get even just 1 point on this part of the works cited rubric it states "Must have the minimum required sources."  If you do not use all the required types of sources, you will get a zero on this part of the rubric.  Works Cited Rubric

URGENT NOTE:  If you do not meet the minimum requirement of sources, you lose all credit for this area of the rubric and most of the credit under the "currency & coverage" section of the rubric.  This means the highest grade you could possibly get is 65%.  Don't let this happen to you!


Poor MLA Format & Content - Insufficient or Incorrect Citation Information - Will Result In a Poor Grade

Here is a typical example of a source cited last year by a senior who got a grade of 35%

"Medical Marijuana - Master Reference"
http://www.druglibrary.org/

I could not find that page at the above address and had to use Google to search for it.
The full website address should have been:

http://www.druglibrary.org/schaffer/medical_mj.htm

But when go there, it is simply a list of links - little actual info is given.  The student should have chosen one of the links, such as "The History of the Non-Medical Use of Drugs in the United States", and then cited that page according to the following format:

Lastname, Firstname. "Title Of The Web Page In Quotes."  Title of Site or

      Larger Work.  Date Written. Name Of Any Associated Institution.  Date of

      Access <http://www.website.org/page.htm>

Whitebread, Charles. "The History of the Non-Medical Use of Drugs in the

       United States ."  DRCNet OnlineLibrary of Drug Policy. 1995.  Shaffer

       Library of Drug Policy.  13 January 2004

       <http://www.druglibrary.org/schaffer/history/whiteb1.htm>

NOTE:  It is absolutely foolish to lose any points on this section of the rubric.  Make use of the works cited forms which are always available in the library.  You can also access these forms on the Gananda Library Website.


ONE FINAL NOTE:  You actually need to READ the sources you cite

RESEARCH TOPIC - POLITICAL INTEREST GROUPS

Report on the effect of a specific political interest group on politlics and elections in the United States Government.

Don't let this happen to you!  One of our former seniors turned in a paper about the environmental group "Greenpeace."  

One of their sources?

Smith, Mark. "Green Peace." Golf Digest. Jan. 1998: 60-62. EBSCOHost. ruben A. Cirillo High School, Walworth. 4 Feb. 2003.

Did they get ANY credit for that source?

NO!

What grade did they get?

35 %

Why such a poor grade?

Since I could not count their article from "Golf Digest", they did not meet the minimum requirements for number and variety of sources.  That means the highest mark they could have recieved was a 65%

What other problems did they have?

  • Too many advocacy sites (3 out of the 5 were from Greenpeace itself - not very objective.)
  • Some format problems - leaving out punctuation, etc. 

 


Plagiarism is Unethical and Illegal - Not To Mention That It Can Damage Your Career

To view a PowerPoint presentaiton, click here.

To learn how to avoid plagiarism, click here.

To see real life examples of the career impact of plagiarism, click here.


 

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